Tuesday, June 19, 2007

Creative writing piece

The roses are red,
the sky is blue
and my eyes
are shining for you.

I like the sea,
I like the moon,
but more than that
...I like you.

The grass is green,
your lips are pink,
and this poem sucks!
...don't you think?

2 comments:

Perla said...

I don`t think your poem sucks. I liked it ! Personally,I admire people who is able to write words which rime. I have tried to do it but I never will be able to put together at least two words that rime.
Congratulations !

anto said...

Hi Pame!!! How are you?? I love that picture of your's... and what can I say about this poem... I don't think it sucks... lol... see you later...